You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line charts illustrate information about the
number
of people
registered for mobile and landline phones in Uruguay
, India, UK, And Uruguay
from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of mobile subscription
for mobile phones in Fix the agreement mistake
subscriptions
Uruguay
increased throughout the period, while
Eritrea stayed stable. In contrast
, the number
of landlines
subscriptions in all four countries stayed stable during the given period with the highest for Change the noun form
landline
UK
.
Correct article usage
the UK
According to
the first graph, Uruguay
had the highest number
of mobile phone registration
Fix the agreement mistake
registrations
of
100 in 2005, Change preposition
apply
whereas
increased slightly to around 130 in 2015. The UK, Correct word choice
which
on the other hand
, started at less than 50 subscribers per 100 people
in 2005, but showed a significant growth in 2013 about 160, followed by a slight decrease to 150. In contrast
, Eritrea and India had zero mobile subscriptions from 2005 until 2007, which witnessed a sharp increase in Indian subscribers to reach a peak of around 70 in 2015, while
Erteira stayed at the same number
of zero during the period.
Turning to the second graph, people
in the United Kingdom subscribed in fixed line in 2005 nearly 60 per 100 people
and stayed relatively at the same number
with a slight decrease to 50 in 2015.Uruguay
had kept the number
around 30 through the ten years. India and Eritrea had almost zero subscriptions from 2005 to 2015.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
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