The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given table depicts the
number
of temporary
migrants
who worked in
such
states as the USA, the UK, New Zealand and Australia in 2003 and
in
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2006. It
also
illustrates the
number
of them per 1000
people
in 2006. As it might be concluded from the table chart, the
number
of migrant workers generally increased in all countries to different extents by 2006.
For
instance
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In the United Kingdom, the
number
of labour
migrants
almost doubled, at the same time, in New Zealand the uplift was not so tangible. Delving into more details, it has to be mentioned that the
number
of labour
migrants
per 1000
people
in 2006 diverges in all countries.
For example
, in the US, there were only about 2
people
per 1000,
however
, in New Zealand
this
number
was 21.1 per 1000
people
.
Additionally
, in
Australia
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Australia,
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there were only 10.7 temporary worker
migrants
per 1000
people
, but in
Britain
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Britain,
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this
number
 was only 4.4.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, migrants, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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