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The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented data provides a graphic illustration
on
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 the proportion of
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 in three sectors of
service
, agriculture, and industry in two different countries. A general look at the pie charts shows that the dominant area of work ,regardless of
the
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gender and country, is
service
. Studying country A,
it is clear that
service
 is the most popular work amongst both men and
women
 with 56 and 49 per cent respectively. The second most liked job is the
agricultural
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agriculture
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 where
women
 play a more significant role with 43% compared to men with 29%.
Lastly
,
male-workers
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male workers
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 take over the
inustry
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industry
 with 15% which is almost double the percentage for
women
. Country
B
however
, depicts a massive difference regarding the figure for agricultural workers. In
B
 only 1 per cent of
women
 and 3 per cent of men
do
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work on farms. Comparing
industry
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industries
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 in A and
B
, it is obvious that
B
 is more male-dominant with 32% male and 11% female
emplyees
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employees
in contrast
 to
service
that
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is more
female centered
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 with 88%.
Overall
, there is a consistency in the popularity of
service
 across both studied countries in
contrary
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contrast
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 to agriculture and industry being less and more
prevelant
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prominent
 in
B
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, women, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • gender employment rate
  • workforce
  • disparity
  • employment trend
  • notable difference
  • counterpart
  • demographic
  • labor market
  • sector
  • predominantly
  • employment rate
  • analysis
  • comparative study
  • statistical data
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