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The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
The given line graph illustrates how the level of
students
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 studying
aboard
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abroad
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 from the US, UK and Australia from 2002 to 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the UK
students
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 had a downward trend
while
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 the remaining
nations
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 remained unchanged over the timeframe.
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, all of the
nations
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'
students
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 stayed at the same rank with the US having the most
students
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 who studied in other countries despite a slight dip. Regarding the
nations
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 which remained steady in the number of overseas
students
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, Australia and the US were at 10000 and 5000
students
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, respectively. In terms of Australian
students
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, it levelled off at the same point at the outset over the 5-year period. Meanwhile, the pupils of the US witnessed a slow decline at roughly 45000
students
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 by 2004; after that, it recovered to 50000
students
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 again by 2007 Turning towards the remaining
nations
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 which is exactly three times more than
Australian
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the Australian
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 one, it
then
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 went down significantly to slightly more than 20000 pupils
at the end
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 of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, nations with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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