The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the

Canadian

universities' graduate numbers between 1992 and 2007.

Overall

, there has been a higher interest, in general, regarding attending and graduating college from the

Canadian

females. On the one hand, the number of

Canadian

males graduating

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universtity

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university

in 1992 was only 70,000. After, it rose gradually until 1995 which

estimated

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back

then

by under 80,000

graduates

Then

, started to fall slightly again until 1998 which had almost the same number of

graduates

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as in

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1992. Anyhow, some fluctuations

was

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noticeable in the numbers before 2001. Ultimately,

a significant increases

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a significant increase

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started to take place as the number of

graduates

from the

Canadian

college was over 95,000 males by the end of 2007.

On the other hand

Canadian

females graduating

universtity

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university

in 1992 was slightly less than 100,000

graduates

. After,

a slight increases

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a slight increase

slight increases

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witnessed

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until 1995, which

estimated

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back

then

by almost 105,000

graduates

and started to fall slightly again until 1999.

Then

, a skyrocketing trend was dominating the numbers of the graduating college girls which was demonstrated with over 145,000 females by the end of 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canadian, graduates with synonyms.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

178 words

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