The table below illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

The table below illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The given table compares the expenses
on
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food and beverage,
accomodation
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accommodation
, clothing and recreational activities of 5 countries in Europe.
Overall
, it can be seen that French, German and British mostly pay for habitation,
whereas
apparel is not their preference.
Additionally
, all the countries mainly
expend
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on food and drink. When it comes to
eating
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category, Turkey and Spain have the biggest consumption with their figure at 36% and 31%, respectively. Meanwhile,
Frace
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France
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, Germany and
UK
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the UK
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are around 25%. Notably, the
Birtish
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British
spend a large amount of money in terms of housing as its proportion doubles that of Spain, presenting 18%,
while
their French, German
as well as
Turkish counterparts range from 20% to around 30%. Regarding
the
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clothing, which has the least spending from
the
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France and Spanish and being recorded at 7% and 8% in that order,
otherwise
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the figures for the
German
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Germans
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, the British and the Turkish are above 10%.
Furthermore
, the pattern of
entertainment's
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payment is different with Germany's being at the top at 19% and Turkey's being at the bottom at 10%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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