The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five

European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and

entertainment.
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The chart compares the amount of
money
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spent on
food
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and beverage, clothing and entertainment in five various nations of Europe, each month.
Overall
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, France, Germany and the UK spend the largest proportion of their
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on Housing,
while
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Turkey
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and Spain mostly purchase
food
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and drink.
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, all countries except for
Turkey
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dedicate the least amount of payment to clothing. As can be seen from the table chart, people in the UK are most interested in purchasing housing at a rate of 37%, and quite contrary, clothing and entertainment are not their favourite sectors by 11% equally.
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, Germany pays the highest and the lowest shares of
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in housing and clothing at 33% and 15% respectively. France
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Germany spends 31% on housing and 7% on clothing.
On the other hand
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, the primary share of
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in
Turkey
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goes to
food
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and drink with 36%,
while
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they think of entertainment as their
last
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option at just 10%. The chart
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shows that
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Spain
similarly
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to
Turkey
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is into purchasing
food
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and drink at a rate of 31%,
whereas
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it can be deduced that they are not interested in spending on clothing, forming a rate of 8%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, food, turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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