In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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in today's contemporary world, and advancement of technology and
artifical
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artificial
intelligence,it is envisioned that buses,cars and trucks will be
driverless
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others argue that
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autonomous
benefits, some claim that that the drawbacks will outweigh the advantages
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essay will delve into the advantages and disadvantages before giving my perspective. some of the
advantage
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driverless
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a driverless
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transport system is reduced risk of
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artificial
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cars are less prone to make human errors
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as overspeeding, disobeying traffic lights, human fatigue,emotional distractions and reckless behaviour behind the wheel. The
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autonomous cars will eradicate around 90% of
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These measures will play a
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pivotal
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negligence.
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, these
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vehicles
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are perceived to largely reduce congestion on roads
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enhancement in
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process,
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will reduce travel time making commuting faster and
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with the ability to communicate with other
vehicles
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and infrastructure,
driverless
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vehicles
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will be able to anticipate and respond to
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hazardous
situations more effectively. A possible stumbling block to
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innovation is loss of employment, a significantly high number of drivers would lose their jobs,
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would put financial constraints among a large population and
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leads
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to poor quality of life,
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if the breadwinner of a family abruptly loses a job, the family might go bankrupt and the implication could be that some of the family members might
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of school as it would be difficult to
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for the high tuition cost.
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could be mitigated by creating job opportunities in the manufacturing and
maintainance
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maintenance
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as well as
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in the development of infrastructure to support
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technology. In conclusion,
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they
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are some
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adoption of autonomous
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firmly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The reduction in
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, improved mobility, and improved urban planning would lead to a more effective transportation system. It is essential to address the concerns surrounding job
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and develop strategies to mitigate them.
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examples
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structure
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balanced view
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understanding topic
You have effectively identified key advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles, showcasing an understanding of the topic.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous
  • driverless
  • human error
  • congestion
  • mobility
  • independence
  • energy-efficient
  • pollution
  • fossil fuel
  • economic impact
  • infrastructure
  • maintenance
  • insurance
  • psychological benefits
  • hacking
  • data privacy
  • ethical programming
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