In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, technology has developed in various fields
especially
public transport. It is believed that all kinds of transportation Add the comma(s)
, especially
vehicles
will move without driver
in the near future. There are both pros and cons to Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
this
change
. In this
essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of this
change
. Nowadays, we are witness
enormous development in a wide range of fields, Change the verb form
are witnessing
such
as medicine, agriculture, industry, and public transport. Transportion
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Transportation
vehicles
have been
undergone numerous changes and every day a better vehicle is produced and introduced to the world because Unnecessary verb
apply
human
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humans
is
always seeking Correct subject-verb agreement
are
to
a much more convenient vehicle. One of these positive changes can be Change preposition
apply
vehicles
that are without a driver. Since the mistakes that a driver may be committed
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commit
is
high, it is a good idea in order to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
reducing
the risk of Change the verb
reduce
accident
to a great extent.
Turning to the other side of the argument. If all Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
vehicle
turn into driverless ones, people who are drivers of public Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
transportations
will be unemployed. Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
Thus
, the unemployment rate will be
considerably increase, leading to Unnecessary verb
apply
disasrtrous
consequences. Correct your spelling
disastrous
Furthermore
, this
change
can be result
in Change the verb form
result
increasing
the number of Replace the word
an increase in
vehicles
because driverless vehicles
are significantly convenient and this
feature make
people tempted to buy. Change the verb form
makes
Therefore
, if this
trend continue
, streets will not have enough capacity to accommodate. Change the verb form
continues
Moreover
, air and noise pollution can be another problem which is detrimental to society.
To conclude
, there is an argue
that driverless Replace the word
argument
vehicles
will be available in the future. This
change
has advantages and drawbacks. According to
the reasons mentioned above, I believe that the benefits outweigh any negetives
. Because safety and Correct your spelling
negatives
negative
immunuty
of Correct your spelling
immunity
individuald
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individuals
individual
is
much more important.Change the verb form
are
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task achievement
Try to elaborate more on each point with specific examples. For instance, mention statistics about accidents caused by human error versus automation in your discussion about safety.
coherence and cohesion
Avoid repetitive phrases like 'vehicles without a driver.' Instead, use synonyms or rephrase to enhance the variety in your language.
coherence and cohesion
Work on grammatical accuracy and avoid simple spelling mistakes. For example, 'transportion vehicles' should be 'transportation vehicles,' and 'disasrtrous consequences' should be 'disastrous consequences.'
task achievement
Good attempt to address both sides of the argument, which shows a balanced view.
coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are well-structured and clearly present the topic and your opinion.