In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Recently, technology has developed in various fields

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public transport. It is believed that all kinds of transportation

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will move without

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in the near future. There are both pros and cons to

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enormous development in a wide range of fields,

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as medicine, agriculture, industry, and public transport.

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undergone numerous changes and every day a better vehicle is produced and introduced to the world because

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a much more convenient vehicle. One of these positive changes can be

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that are without a driver. Since the mistakes that a driver may

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the risk of

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to a great extent. Turning to the other side of the argument. If all

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turn into driverless ones, people who are drivers of public

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will be unemployed.

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considerably increase, leading to

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because driverless

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are significantly convenient and

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people tempted to buy.

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, streets will not have enough capacity to accommodate.

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, air and noise pollution can be another problem which is detrimental to society.

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that driverless

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will be available in the future.

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has advantages and drawbacks.

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the reasons mentioned above, I believe that the benefits outweigh any

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much more important.

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task achievement

Try to elaborate more on each point with specific examples. For instance, mention statistics about accidents caused by human error versus automation in your discussion about safety.

coherence and cohesion

Avoid repetitive phrases like 'vehicles without a driver.' Instead, use synonyms or rephrase to enhance the variety in your language.

coherence and cohesion

Work on grammatical accuracy and avoid simple spelling mistakes. For example, 'transportion vehicles' should be 'transportation vehicles,' and 'disasrtrous consequences' should be 'disastrous consequences.'

task achievement

Good attempt to address both sides of the argument, which shows a balanced view.

coherence and cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are well-structured and clearly present the topic and your opinion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

285 words

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