Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together
Dear Jashan,
I hope
this
letter finds you in high spirits. I am chuffed to hear that you're interested in learning a new sport,
and want my help in Remove the comma
apply
this
talk. As you're english
, I suggest you Change the capitalization
English
to
play Remove the particle
apply
cricket
. This
game is in
trending right now, it would be easier to learnChange preposition
apply
,
because we are already familiar with Remove the comma
apply
this
game to some extent.
Furthermore
, there are plenty of stadiums and cricket
mentors available in the market, who can give you training at a reasonable price. Apart from
this
, some local cricket
groups also
offer opportunities to join them in their friendly matches every week. I wonder it
would be great, I mean it sounds enjoy playing and Correct word choice
if it
do
exercises without spending Wrong verb form
doing
any
single penny.
I have an excellent idea. Correct determiner usage
a
Actually
I was looking for a partner, who Add a comma
Actually,
can
join me in the gym, Wrong verb form
could
however
, why not
we both learn Correct your spelling
whyn't
cricket
together. Luckily, I know one of my friends, who is a skipper of a cricket
team. Isn't it a good idea?
Inform me, would you like me to join you?
Good luck,
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coherence cohesion
Proofread for grammatical errors and sentence structure to improve clarity and cohesion.
task achievement
Expand on some points for a more comprehensive response, such as the benefits of learning cricket.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,