You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter -Describe the work you have been doing -Explain why you can no longer do this work -Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear
I am writing a letter to you
give
information, yesterday I got an offer of Fix the infinitive
to give
job
Correct article usage
a job
another
company and Change preposition
from another
Iam
sending Correct your spelling
I am
letter
to give me Add an article
a letter
permisson
to out of here.
Correct your spelling
permission
Two
days, I have to do for charity and give my Change preposition
For two
time
to ask another society
in my hometown and ask money
from the Change preposition
for money
society
and ask whatever
Change preposition
for whatever
their
have. I am out of here because want to work Correct pronoun usage
they
for got
a lot of money and make my family Change preposition
to get
be
happy. As we know Unnecessary verb
apply
the
charity can not give income and spend my Correct article usage
apply
time
just for
help another Change preposition
to
society
who needs
.
I can't Correct pronoun usage
needs it
to
stay Change the verb form
apply
of
here Change preposition
apply
because
for a long Correct word choice
apply
time
because need income to get
buy food and basic needs. Verb problem
apply
The
Correct article usage
Society
society
must attention with
Change preposition
to
they
Correct pronoun usage
their
life
to get Fix the agreement mistake
lives
salary
and Correct article usage
a salary
can
buy all Verb problem
apply
Correct article usage
the family
family
needs
I have a friend to change my position Change noun form
family's
in
here. Its name Change preposition
apply
Add a missing verb
is awan
awan
. Maybe he Change the capitalization
Awan
want
to work for Change the verb form
wants
long
Change the article
a long
time
.
In conclusion, The
Correct article usage
apply
society
must give many
attention Replace the quantifier
much
for
Change preposition
to
Add an article
the family
a family
family
because they can not Fix the agreement mistake
families
to
survive Fix the infinitive
apply
for
Change preposition
in
future
without a job and Correct article usage
the future
get
payroll.Wrong verb form
getting
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suitable writing tone
Use more formal and polite language, especially since you are addressing a manager. This can make your letter more professional and respectful.
logical structure
Make sure your sentences and ideas flow smoothly by using connecting words and phrases. This helps the reader follow your message clearly.
complete response
You have covered all the necessary points: describing your work, explaining why you can no longer do it, and recommending another person.
greeting and closing
You ended the letter with a conclusion, summarizing your main point which is good for closure.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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