The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The bar graphs show data about the proportion of people over 65
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five different regions in 1985 and in 2035. In general, there will be more elderly people in 2035 than in 1985 throughout the country. And every region has more than
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per cent
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increase in 2035, compared to the data from 1985. In
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, Wales showed the highest elderly people percentage among the five territories in 1985 and it will be at
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peak as well in 2035. Northern Ireland hit a low of around 12
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in 1985,
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it will be increased to approximately 23 per cent like UK and England in 2035.
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, Scotland had nearly 14 percent of the aged population but it surged to 25% in 1985 and in 2035, respectively. The proportion of
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population in Scotland will surpass those from England and the UK in 2035 unlike in 1985.
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