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Band 6.5

The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
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The maps
given
Wrong verb form
give
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 information about present the way in which the parts of an
office
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 building and in the future to change an area by building
new
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a new
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office
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.
Overall
Linking Words
, the
grass
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 will be removed
over
Change preposition
from
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map
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the map
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.
Additionally
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, future
office
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 building will be added some chairs. Beginning with the
south-west
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southwest
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 half of the left
grass
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 will be concerned, it will be replaced with three chairs.
Entrance
Correct article usage
The entrance
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 will be moved canter at
south
Correct article usage
the south
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 and
both-side’s
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both sides’
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entrance
Fix the agreement mistake
entrances
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 will be combined with two
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office
Change to a plural noun
offices
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become
Fix the infinitive
to become
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 larger
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office
Fix the agreement mistake
offices
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.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, at south-east half of
right
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the right
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grass
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 will be changed with
meeting
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a meeting
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 area and chairs. Moving onto the
north-east
Correct your spelling
northeast
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 a part of the right
grass
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 will be changed coffee machine and WCs will be moved
at
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to
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 the corner. The storeroom will be unchanged about location and size.
Moreover
Linking Words
,
canteen
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the canteen
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 will be concerned and changed
office
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.
Furthermore
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, the north-west kitchen will be changed to become
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office
Correct article usage
an office
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 and part of the left
grass
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 will be changed outdoor seating area.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words office, grass with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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