Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: oYour reason for writing oWhat you would like to happen oA nice, respectful style.
Dear Mr. Hobbit
I’m writing
this
letter to let you know that your lovely pet keep
making noises all the time.
When I’m in my Change the verb form
keeps
house
I don’t have serenity since your dog
keep
barking all the timeChange the verb form
keeps
,
because it Remove the comma
apply
awaken
me at dawn and Change the verb form
awakens
it kept
me awake until midnight, it Wrong verb form
keeps
affect
my daily routine and productivity at work, so I feel disturbed and not comfortable Change the verb form
affects
everyday
.
I know sometimes people can’t control their Replace the word
every day
dog
, but I’d be really grateful if you can
try to do something to your Wrong verb form
could
dog
, such
as call a pet trainer, so your dog
could keep quiet and bark when there is
strangers around your Change the verb form
are
house
, or maybe you could install some sound proof
around your Correct your spelling
soundproof
house
, such
as foam in your doors, windows.
If you don’t have time to find a dog
trainer or some technician, I will be very happy to help you find one, either the dog
trainer or the technician, also
I can help you install some sound proof
in your Correct your spelling
soundproof
house
if you want to keep the budget low.
Keep in touch
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task achievement
Expand on what specific changes you would like to happen. Be more explicit in your requests.
coherence cohesion
Improve transitions between paragraphs for a smoother flow.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea.
task achievement
The tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this type of letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,