Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: oYour reason for writing oWhat you would like to happen oA nice, respectful style.

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Dear Mr. Hobbit I’m writing

this

letter to let you know that your lovely pet

keep

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making noises all the time. When I’m in my

house

I don’t have serenity since your

dog

keep

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barking all the time

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because it

awaken

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me at dawn and

it kept

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me awake until midnight, it

affect

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my daily routine and productivity at work, so I feel disturbed and not comfortable

everyday

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. I know sometimes people can’t control their

dog

, but I’d be really grateful if you

can

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try to do something to your

dog

such

as call a pet trainer, so your

dog

could keep quiet and bark when there

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strangers around your

house

, or maybe you could install some

sound proof

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around your

house

such

as foam in your doors, windows. If you don’t have time to find a

dog

trainer or some technician, I will be very happy to help you find one, either the

dog

trainer or the technician,

also

I can help you install some

sound proof

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in your

house

if you want to keep the budget low. Keep in touch Sumitro

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Expand on what specific changes you would like to happen. Be more explicit in your requests.

coherence cohesion

Improve transitions between paragraphs for a smoother flow.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea.

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The tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for this type of letter.

coherence cohesion

The letter is structured with a clear beginning, middle, and end.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

184 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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