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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Food/Drink/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21% Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20% Spain 16.80% 6.51% 1.98% Sweden 15. 77% 5.40% 3.22% Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Food/Drink/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21% Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20% Spain 16.80% 6.51% 1.98% Sweden 15. 77% 5.40% 3.22% Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%
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The given table depicts the information pertaining to the expenditure on exclusive categories across five different nations in 2002.
Overall
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, it can be observed that all countries spent the
money
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 most on food/drink/tobacco. Meanwhile, Leisure/Education had the lowest figures in the table. It can be
also
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 noted that Sweden invests the least
money
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 in all the items, with the exception of Leisure/Education. Beginning with food/drink/tobacco,
Turkey
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 had the highest figures with the record at 32.14%.
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, Ireland's expenditure was a little lower than
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Turkey'
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money
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, which was exactly at 28.91%. In terms of Italy, Spain and
Turkey
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, the
money
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 was over 15%, with the most being Spain (18.8%). Turning to the remaining statistics, Italy spent more
money
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 on clothing/footwear, comprising 9%,
while
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 the lowest was Sweden on these items at 5.4%. For three other nations, the numbers were slightly over 6%. Moving on to Leisure/Education, all the figures were under 5%, with the highest one being
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Turkey'
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 cost.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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