The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following table illustrates

top

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ten nations with the most expensive fuel

along with

the budgetary information.

Overall

, the highest salary

is hold

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by Norway among 9 others,

meanwhile

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the portion of

petrol

spending in Norway is the

least

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lowest

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On the other hand

, Eritrea has the

least

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lowest

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income

but its percentage of monthly

income

spend

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petrol

is the highest.

Firstly

, the world's ten most expensive countries

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dominated by

west

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countries, only Eritrea comes from a different continent.

According to

the financial information, both monthly disposable

income

and

petrol

expenditure in Norway

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apply

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the the highest,

account

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accounting

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for 4329

dollars

and 319

dollars

, respectively. Sweden ranks 2 in terms of disposable

income

, but its monthly

petrol

expenditure is quite a little, only 275

dollars

per month,

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the bottom three. As for the proportion of monthly

income

spent on

petrol

, these two countries record around 7% which

are

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not in line with their monthly disposable

income

that

are

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quite over the average.

On the other hand

, Eritrea has the

least

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lowest

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monthly disposable

income

, at about 450

dollars

, but its portion

spends

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spent

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petrol

is more

that

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than

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half.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

189 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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geographical distribution
per capita income
Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
correlate
anomalies
impact
cost of living
transportation
external factors
oil production rates
import dependencies
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The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think that success life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skill. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions.

Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.