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The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
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The given bar chart shows how much
percentage
 of
people
 born in
Autsralia
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Australia
 and it shows
people
 who were born outside
Australia
livng
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living
 in urban, rural and
town
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towns
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 from 1995 to 2010. In
genereal
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general
, cities
had been
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were
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 crowded in 1995 and 2010 but
towns
 and rural areas very changed. In 1995,
percentage
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the percentage
show examples
 of
people
 born in
Australia
 was almost 50
percent
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per cent
show examples
 and it increased to just over 60
percent
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per cent
show examples
 in 2010.
People
 who
born
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were born
show examples
 in
Australia
's
towns
was
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were
show examples
 20
percent
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per cent
show examples
 in 1995 and it decreased slightly to almost
percent
 18.
Number
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A number
The number
show examples
 of
people
 born in
Australia
's rural areas was approximately 30
percent
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per cent
show examples
 in 1995 and it fell to
percentage
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the percentage
a percentage
show examples
 of
towns
 in 2010.
Percentage
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The percentage
show examples
 of
people
 born
in
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apply
show examples
outside
Australia's
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Australia
show examples
 was 60
percent
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per cent
show examples
 when started and it increased dramatically to 80
percent
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per cent
show examples
.
Number
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A number
The number
show examples
 of
people
 who
born
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were born
show examples
 in
Australia
's
towns
had been
Wrong verb form
was
show examples
 almost 10
percent
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per cent
show examples
 in 1995 and it didn't change.
Percentage
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The percentage
show examples
 of
people
 born
in
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apply
show examples
outside
Australia
 was 40
percent
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per cent
show examples
 but it
decreas
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decreased
decreases
decrease
 sharply to no more no less
5
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than 5
show examples
percent
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per cent
show examples
 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 68%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, australia, towns, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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