The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The given bar chart shows how much
percentage
of people
born in Autsralia
and it shows Correct your spelling
Australia
people
who were born outside Australia
livng
in urban, rural and Correct your spelling
living
town
from 1995 to 2010. In Fix the agreement mistake
towns
genereal
, cities Correct your spelling
general
had been
crowded in 1995 and 2010 but Wrong verb form
were
towns
and rural areas very changed.
In 1995, percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
people
born in Australia
was almost 50 percent
and it increased to just over 60 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2010. Change the spelling
per cent
People
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
's towns
was
20 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
percent
in 1995 and it decreased slightly to almost Change the spelling
per cent
percent
18. Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
people
born in Australia
's rural areas was approximately 30 percent
in 1995 and it fell to Change the spelling
per cent
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
towns
in 2010.
Percentage
of Correct article usage
The percentage
people
born in
outside Change preposition
apply
Australia's
was 60 Change noun form
Australia
percent
when started and it increased dramatically to 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
people
who born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
's towns
had been
almost 10 Wrong verb form
was
percent
in 1995 and it didn't change. Change the spelling
per cent
Percentage
of Correct article usage
The percentage
people
born in
outside Change preposition
apply
Australia
was 40 percent
but it Change the spelling
per cent
decreas
sharply to no more no lessCorrect your spelling
decreased
decreases
decrease
5
Change preposition
than 5
percent
in 2010.Change the spelling
per cent
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