The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the kinds of electricity sources fabricated in 2003 in 4 different countries.
In general,
hydropowerpower
and fossil Correct your spelling
hydropower power
Use synonyms
fuel
are produced by all of the countries included Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
while
nuclear power is only available in India and Sweden.
Linking Words
To begin
with, India produced more than three quarter fossil Linking Words
fuel
Use synonyms
while
Vietnam only produced more than half of its full kind production of sources.
Different from those two, Morocco and Sweden produced Linking Words
hydropowerpower
. Morocco produced 95% Correct your spelling
hydropower power
while
the rest percentage is fossil Linking Words
fuel
. Sweden is the only country Use synonyms
produces
almost 45 per cent of its nuclear power and Correct pronoun usage
that produces
produced
less than 5 per cent of fossil Wrong verb form
produces
fuel
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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