The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
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The diagrams illustrate the transformation of the
silkworm
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and how silk fabrics and yarns are produced from its
cocoon
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. The life cycle of the
silkworm
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begins with the moth, that lays eggs. 10 days later, they evolve into
silkworm
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larvae and start eating mulberry leaves. During the next 4 to 6 weeks larva create silk thread around themselves. It takes another 3 to 8 days to close the
cocoon
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. A moth evolves after 16 days, and the empty
cocoon
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could be collected for silk production. Production starts when selected cocoons are put into the boiled water.
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, wet cocoons can be unwound to 300-900 metres of thread. After that, yarns are twisted and dyed or weaved and
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coloured. In fact, it takes from 8 to 11 weeks for the
silkworm
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to generate a
cocoon
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that provides a thread of 300 to 900 metres in length. It is noticeable, that for the production process, large amounts of both energy and water are required.
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