The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the
number
of British males and females, who continued their study, during three decades, and shows if they pursued full-time or part-time education. It is evident that,
the majority of them had part-time classes, and the Remove the comma
apply
number
of educated people were
approximately the same between the genders.
Change the verb form
was
According to
the data, the number
of educated women in part-time study had an upward trend and were skyrocket
in 1990-91 and reached more than 1000 Wrong verb form
skyrocketed
thousand
. However
, their nember
had experienced a significant drop in 1970-71, nearly 700 Correct your spelling
number
numbers
thousand
.
At the outset of the period, the number
of men, who followed their higher education were
around 1000 Change the verb form
was
thousand
, and it saw a slight decrease in 1980-81 reaching less than 900 thousand
. Following
by almost 100 Wrong verb form
Followed
thousand
growth in 1990-91.
The number
of both genders who participated in the full time
courses Add a hyphen
full-time
were
kept under 200 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
thousand
during the era.Submitted by Negar_seddigh on
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