The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart below explains how much money British
people
allocate to charity by age range in 1990 and 2010.
People
aged 18 to 50 spent more money helping others in 1990 than in 2010.
In contrast
, after 50 years old, they gave more money in 2010 than in 1990. In 1990,
people
aged 18-25 spent around 15% on charity, which gradually increased to more than 40% for
people
aged 36-50. Unfortunately, it decreased to 35% and 30% for
people
aged 51-56 and over 65, respectively. Based on
this
trend, the highest percentage was 40%, which came from middle adulthood (36-50). In 2010,
people
aged 18-25 only spent around 5% on sharing (lower than in 1990).
Then
, similar to the trend in 1990, it gradually climbed to 35% (below in 1990) by
people
aged 36-50.
However
, it still increased to approximately 40% for
people
aged 51-65 and
then
decreased to 35% for
people
more than 65 years old.
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