The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

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The bar chart below explains how much money British

people

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allocate to charity by age range in 1990 and 2010.

People

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aged 18 to 50 spent more money helping others in 1990 than in 2010.

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, after 50 years old, they gave more money in 2010 than in 1990. In 1990,

people

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aged 18-25 spent around 15% on charity, which gradually increased to more than 40% for

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aged 36-50. Unfortunately, it decreased to 35% and 30% for

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aged 51-56 and over 65, respectively. Based on

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trend, the highest percentage was 40%, which came from middle adulthood (36-50). In 2010,

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aged 18-25 only spent around 5% on sharing (lower than in 1990).

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, similar to the trend in 1990, it gradually climbed to 35% (below in 1990) by

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aged 36-50.

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, it still increased to approximately 40% for

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aged 51-65 and

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decreased to 35% for

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more than 65 years old.

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The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people graviate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Certain people truly believe that planning for the future is a complete waste of time. They think that the present should be the main focus. Do you agree with this view?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?