The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The two maps compare the structure of the central
library
in the current time to how it was 20 years ago.
Overall
, the
library
consists of four corner sections, a central area, and a main entrance,
this
structure has not changed, except that the content of each section has. The central area used to contain chairs and tables but they are no longer there, next to the entrance there used to be an enquiry desk and a reading
room
, they are now replaced by a cafe and computer
room
.
Also
, the middle section used to contain adult fiction
books
on both sides, they are now all combined
along with
the information desk and self-service machine on one side
,
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and all reference
books
on the other side. the far end of the
library
used to have a
room
for video games and
other
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another
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room
for children's
books
, nowadays there
are
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is
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a lecture
room
and a completely developed
kids
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kids'
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area, that does not only have
books
,
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but
also
has comfortable sofas and
are
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is
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now hosting storytelling events. in conclusion, it is apparent that the
library
improved to offer a better and wider range of services over the
last
two decades, and is now a place for reading, social gatherings at the coffee shop, events, and lectures.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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