The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides us with some information about the
percentage
of difference in income between men and women during three decades starting in 1978. What is obvious is, despite the unbelievable increase in Australia
, Other countries including Japan, the USA, France
and the UK
experienced a downfall. Therefore
, in the four countries of five that this
chart shows us, women’s income is near to witnessing equality more than ever.
To begin
with, Japan has the most difference between men’s and women’s income and no matter what, it always takes the lead in these statistics. However
, in the beginning
year which is 1978, Japan had approximately a 50% difference and over time it decreased considerably and it ended up being 40%.
Regarding the second and third places which contain the US and the Add a comma
beginning,
UK
, They approximately experience same path and have declined over this
period. Although
the UK
has a bigger percentage
at first(it is almost 33% whereas
the UK
is below 30 percent
) Change the spelling
per cent
also
it has a sharper decrease over the first two decades. In the end, both US and UK
finished where they started respectively 2nd(28%) and 3rd(27%).
Finally
, the last
two places belong to France
and Australia
. In the starting year(1978), France
and Australia
have thereabouts 20 percent with respectively 19% and 17%. Regarding the first two decades, they both have a relatively reduced and France
has a higher percentage
. However
, in 1998, Australia
overtook France
and over a decade it climbed and levelled out at 25% and second place whereas
France
had the lowest percentage
at 18%.Submitted by spourkhalil79 on
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