The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

 and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of British and Wales families who were a landlord or tenant between 1918 and 2011. It is evident that,
while
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the
number
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of house owners increased, the
number
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of renters decreased. At the outset of the period, almost eighty per
cent
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of citizens lived as a tenant,
whereas
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, only twenty per
cent
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of the population lived in their own houses. From 1918 to 1971 the
number
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of renters experienced a downward trend and reached fifty percent.
However
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, the
number
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of landlords experienced a noticeable increase and reached fifty per
cent
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in 1917, the same as renters.
After
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this
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era, the
number
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of residents who bought houses increased significantly and skyrocketed in 2001, by approximately seventy per
cent
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. In the next decade, the
number
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of buyers saw around a five per
cent
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decrease.
In contrast
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, the
number
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of individuals who rented a house declined over thirty years and had a slight growth in 2011 and stood at thirty-five per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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