The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The following graph illustrates the
temperature
in New York from January to June
,
2012 Remove the comma
apply
along with
the sales of bathing suits.
Overall
, the highest total revenue earned from selling bathing suites occurred in April, meanwhile the lowest was in June
. Conversely
with the lowest revenue, the highest average Add a comma
Conversely,
temperature
also
occurred in June
.
In detail, the income yielded during
January to March gradually increased from 100 Change preposition
from
dollars
to 150 dollar
. It almost doubled in April, recorded at about 290 Change to a plural noun
dollars
dollars
. But there was an abrupt drop in May which accounted under
100 Change preposition
for under
dollars
. This
revenue continued to plunge to nearly 20 dollars
in June
.
On the other hand
, there was an upward trend on
average monthly temperatures. The coolest Change preposition
in
temperature
was in February, recorded at 30 Fahrenheit and the warmest was in June
, approximately 65 Fahrenheit. The correlation of
Change preposition
between
temperature
and the
bathing suit sales was in line from January to April. Correct article usage
apply
However
, it did not follow the previous pattern in May and June
. The temperature
for the last
two months were
the highest Change the verb form
was
instead
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