In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advatages outweigh the disadvantages ?

In an ever-progressive society, there is an emergence of young adults who have had a stable occupation

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to nest with their

family

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.

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of independence

as well as

the privacy concerns predominate over the adversity of financial benefits. The most disadvantageous factor of living

together with

parents

is that it can limit the ability to manage these individuals’ lives. To put it simply, these guardians have an enormous responsibility to well-adopted their

off-spring

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, so they tend to overcontrol their children even when they are mature so as to

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discipline.

As a consequence

, these young people will gradually lose their instinct which they have already had as they are not willing to confront

with

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the obstacles without their

parents

, contributing to the long-term dependence on the caregivers. Another drawback of sharing a living space

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parents

is the capability of privacy invasion. It should be noted that the bulk of young adults are

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in their love relationships and it will be challenging for them to develop

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romantic with the

surveilance

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surveillance

of guardians.

Furthermore

, there is a huge discrepancy between two

seperated

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separated

separate

people who were born in two different

era

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, contributing to

the

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distinct

of

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lifestyle

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along with

daily routines. As a negative result, conflict in a family is inevitable since neither sympathy nor similarities are found in a conversation.

Nevertheless

, a minority of

civilans

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civilians

claim that residing with

parents

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is a wise choice on the

ground

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of saving finance. With that said, the more houses are erected, the more cost of living with bills are paid.

This

may be true in some

certains

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cases

, yet the

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is constantly growing, simultaneously, reinforcing the residents’

avarage

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average

income,

creating

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opportunity

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for them to address the expense of living without any

assisstance

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assistance

from

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guardians.

Consequently

, not only do

parents

mitigate the anxiety about their children, but

also

do themselves can

learn

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how to manage

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finance

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efficiently. Taking all into account, the disadvantages of insufficient independence

along with

privacy invasion overshadow the benefit of saving money.

Additionally

, young adults should have a house for themselves

instead

of being reliant

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their

parents

.