The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1986 and now.

The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1986 and now.
The given images illustrate the changes with have occurred in the
village
of Stokeford from 1986 to now.
Overall
, the area can be recognised that the
village
has undergone a visible transition to include more residences.
Additionally
, the primary school
ang
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and
post office have remained untouched. Beginning with the eastern half of the
village
, as far as
,
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the farmland has been disappeared and replaced by the houses.
Furthermore
, the
mainroad
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main road
was extended and part of the road was connected with
a
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half of the
village
. More residences were
demonlished
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demolished
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to the
mainroad
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main road
. The large house was converted into
retirement
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home.
Whereas
the bridge and the primary school
was remained
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in place
but
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the primary school was expanded by constructing two more buildings. Moving on to the western part of the
village
where the shop and the farmland were
knocked-down
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and replaced with more houses around the
mainroad
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main road
. Whilst, the post office
have
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remained unchanged.
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