The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1986 and now.
The given images illustrate the changes with have occurred in the
village
of Stokeford from 1986 to now. Overall
, the area can be recognised that the village
has undergone a visible transition to include more residences. Additionally
, the primary school ang
post office have remained untouched.
Beginning with the eastern half of the Correct your spelling
and
village
, as far as,
the farmland has been disappeared and replaced by the houses. Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, the mainroad
was extended and part of the road was connected with Correct your spelling
main road
a
half of the Remove the article
apply
village
. More residences were demonlished
Correct your spelling
demolished
belongs
to the Wrong verb form
belonging
mainroad
. The large house was converted into Correct your spelling
main road
retirement
home. Add an article
a retirement
Whereas
the bridge and the primary school was remained
in place Change to the active voice
remained
has remained
but
the primary school was expanded by constructing two more buildings.
Moving on to the western part of the Correct word choice
apply
village
where the shop and the farmland were knocked-down
and replaced with more houses around the Correct your spelling
knocked down
mainroad
. Whilst, the post office Correct your spelling
main road
have
remained unchanged.Change the verb form
has
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