The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1986 and now.

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The given images illustrate the changes with have occurred in the

village

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of Stokeford from 1986 to now.

Overall

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, the area can be recognised that the

village

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has undergone a visible transition to include more residences.

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, the primary school

ang

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and

post office have remained untouched. Beginning with the eastern half of the

village

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, as far as

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the farmland has been disappeared and replaced by the houses.

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, the

mainroad

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main road

was extended and part of the road was connected with

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half of the

village

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. More residences were

demonlished

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demolished

belongs

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to the

mainroad

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main road

. The large house was converted into

retirement

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a retirement

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home.

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the bridge and the primary school

was remained

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remained

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in place

but

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the primary school was expanded by constructing two more buildings. Moving on to the western part of the

village

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where the shop and the farmland were

knocked-down

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knocked down

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and replaced with more houses around the

mainroad

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main road

. Whilst, the post office

have

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has

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remained unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1986 and now.

In many counties are investing in new technology to deal with public. Why is this happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of government money?

Some people think that work is the most important thing in people's lives. Without the success of a career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.