The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how the city named Denham has been reconstructed from 1986 to nowadays .
Overall
, it can be seen the biggest changes have occurred on the west-southern side
of the village, while
the northern part stays almost unchanged .
The first map shows the village plan in 1986. There was the bridge on the northern side
of town. Further
down the trail were seven homes and two stores below , while
on the other side
of the street was the primary school which was the main educational activity of the town . Also
,there were farmlands , that is
on the west-southern and north-eastern side
of the village. Finally
, there was the post office in the centre of the city and large buildings surrounded by gardens .
Whereas
the second map demonstrates the change which happened over the given period. The first observable trait is the bridge which has been stayed
unchanged . Verb problem
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However
, on the old place of shops and farmland has been built an array of houses for residents. Moreover
, two new student blocks have been reconstructed around the elementary school. While
the south side
of town has been completely changed, meaning three large apartments have been converted into homes for the elderly but
the main part of gardens around it completely disappeared.Correct word choice
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