Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to information in many countries. This is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in the majority of nations, technological advancement provides

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unlimited access to vast

amount

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amounts

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of

information

in less than a second.

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phenomenon puts

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societies

in

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great risk. I strongly agree with

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statement because

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viral videos might have negative impacts on children’s mental health and

adults

might

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to fake

information

which

decrease

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their efficiency at work. On the one hand, children have

easily

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access to the numerous

information

with violent and aggressive

contents

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content

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on social media that might be shared by a person who suffers from personality disorders. These photos and videos are shared on the internet without any supervision and could convey

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massive stress on children.

This

sence

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sense

of anxiety might

leads

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the young generations to depression and isolation, and might have a destructive effect on their studies and their social skills.

For instance

, if a child watched an assault attack video on

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Instagram, he or she would terrified and could not feel safe

niether

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either

at home

nor

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at school.

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adults

occupations could be harmed by technology development. Nowadays, the majority of employees google about every

tasks

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at their workplace. They do not try to learn a new skill or seek

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new knowledge, because they feel that they could find the best solution to their problem as soon as possible by surfing the net.

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trend leads the

labor

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force to be unknowledgeable and uneducated.

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,

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society faces many issues

due to

the insufficient

adults

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who just pursue

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false

information

, which

are

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spread on

the

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blogs by ordinary people

not

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professionals, without any confirmation. In conclusion, I

believ

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believe

that

technology

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progression has some

dangerouse

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dangerous

impacts not only on

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children who might be scared by the aggressive

contents

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content

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,

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but

also

on

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adults

who impose

to

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a huge sum of unreal

information

.