The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.
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The given bat chart depicts 4 main school travelling methods
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11 to 16-year-old
students
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in the UK in a specific year.
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, when it comes to short-distance journeys,
students
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tended to travel independently,
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vehicles were used more for far journeys.
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, there was no room for independent travel when the distance was over 5 deep. Beginning with the first 2 categories which children used most. As for walking, 90% of the young applied
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kind of method
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the 1-mile trip, approximately 4 times more than the number of
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going on the 2 to 5-mile journey, alternatively, there was 60% of
students
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applied
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way for trips that lasted for 1-2 miles. In terms of bikes,
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-2 mile
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trip trip
made up in the
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of 78% of children travelling,
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there was a similarity between those journeys that were 1 mile or 2-5 miles long. Turning to the remaining transportation
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nearly 70% of young people used the bus for over 5-mile trips, 10 times more than the trip that was 1-2 miles long.
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but not least, 2-5 mile way accounted for 30% of the travellers and other distances made up under 20% of
students
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travelling to school.
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