The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007
The pie charts compare the proportion of main
reasons
for relocating
people
from/to Britain Raya in 2007. It was divided into two
reasons
, immigration and emigration followed by the detailed categories involving a definite job, searching for work, continuing study, joining a new family member, no
reason
, and others.
Overall
, there were different
reasons
for leaving and joining the UK with the most popular
reason
people
conducted immigrate or emigrate was definite jobs.
To begin
with, the result of a survey about the main
reason
people
immigrate was definite jobs with 30% followed by joint formal study at 26%, accompanied by the member family was in third place with 15%. Continued by other
reasons
and look for work at 12%, and 11%, respectively. The lowest percentage at 6% with no information
reason
.
Moreover
, the first
reason
people
conducted emigration was job permanence with 29%. The second
reason
for leaving was to look for an opportunity to work the result of the survey was around 22%,
then
people
chose to answer “not respond stated” at 18%, followed by other
reasons
at 13%.
Lastly
,
people
choose to stay studying in the UK rather than go abroad with a percentage around 4%.
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