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The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of fatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph showcases the percentage of perimortem injuries in the workforce, in New Zealand , in the years 1992 and 2011. Generally , the most common trauma among workers that went through
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 Roadway Industry for both years.
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 the least encountered is drowning in the water places. Observing the statistics more deeply , employees from various companies went through vehicle accidents less than 20% in 1992, though in 2011 the number of
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 , labourers whose
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 reason
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 electrical shock , suicide drowning
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 reach even 5% of the entire community , some other causes as Homicide or Falling from high levels of buildings reached more or less 10-15% proportion . In conclusion , New Zealand occurrences mostly
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decreased
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