Our English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 'Say how important New year is to people in your country 'Describe how New year is celebrated in your country 'Explain what you like about New year celebrations in your country
Dear Rasul
I believe that you will get something from
this
letter that you need for your project and I will describe how the New Year
will be celebrated in my little country
.This
will be very
interesting letter.
Add an article
a very
Firstly
everyone trust
the New Change the verb form
trusts
Year
and Santa Claus .Also
it is very important and Add a comma
Also,
this
holiday has been celebrated in our country
for many years.Then
it is desire
Change the verb form
desires
new
coming Correct article usage
a new
year
and the coming year
will be good and achieve that goals
.Change the determiner
that goal
those goals
Also
Add a comma
Also,
last
year
's dreams will achieve
coming Wrong verb form
be achieved
year
.
New
Change preposition
On new
year
Eve's Capitalize word
Year
my
Change preposition
in my
country
a lot of people are gathering
,Wrong verb form
gather
Correct your spelling
women
women's
womens
prepare delicious food,children decorate Correct your spelling
women
home
and Correct pronoun usage
their home
Change the capitalization
Christmas
christmas
Change the capitalization
Christmas
tree
and we can see lots of fireworks in the sky
Until 12 o'clock at night,people wait for Fix the agreement mistake
trees
new
coming Add an article
the new
year
.The most attractive thing in our country
is sweets and cakes on the table, but the best thing is trust
people have in each other and the confidence on their faces.Correct article usage
the trust
Not to mention
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coherence cohesion
To improve logical structure, try using more connectors and transition words. This will help in making your letter flow more smoothly from one point to another.
task achievement
While the response is quite complete, try to include more specific details or personal anecdotes to make it even more engaging.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well done, making the letter feel personal and friendly.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses all the points required by the task, giving a comprehensive response.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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