Our English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 'Say how important New year is to people in your country 'Describe how New year is celebrated in your country 'Explain what you like about New year celebrations in your country

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Dear Rasul I believe that you will get something from

this

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letter that you need for your project and I will describe how the New

Year

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will be celebrated in my little

country

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This

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will be

very

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interesting letter.

Firstly

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everyone

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the New

Year

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and Santa Claus .

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Also

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it is very important and

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holiday has been celebrated in our

country

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for many years.

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is desire

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new

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a new

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coming

year

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and the coming

year

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will be good and achieve

that goals

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that goal

those goals

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Also

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last

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year

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's dreams will

achieve

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be achieved

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coming

year

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New

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year

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Year

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Eve's

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in my

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country

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a lot of people

are gathering

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gather

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women

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womens

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women

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prepare delicious food,children decorate

home

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their home

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and

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Christmas

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christmas

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tree

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and we can see lots of fireworks in the sky Until 12 o'clock at night,people wait for

new

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the new

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coming

year

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.The most attractive thing in our

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is sweets and cakes on the table, but the best thing is

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the trust

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people have in each other and the confidence on their faces.

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fireworks in the sky

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coherence cohesion

To improve logical structure, try using more connectors and transition words. This will help in making your letter flow more smoothly from one point to another.

task achievement

While the response is quite complete, try to include more specific details or personal anecdotes to make it even more engaging.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are well done, making the letter feel personal and friendly.

task achievement

The letter successfully addresses all the points required by the task, giving a comprehensive response.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

165 words

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significant
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fireworks
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festive atmosphere
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