The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
Verb problem
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bar chart illustrates the proportion of European
households
who used different numbers of
cars
from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of
households
using 1
car
and more than 2
cars
saw an upward trend,
while
the opposite was true for the
cars
which were not used at all.
Additionally
, even though no
car
's figure was the most used at the beginning, it was soon replaced by 1
car
for almost the 30-year period. Looking at the figures for 1
car
and more than 2
cars
in
further
detail, both of them commenced at around 30% and 21% for
households
in 1971. As for 1
car
's percentage, it reached a peak at 40% in 1981 but
then
decrease
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significantly to roughly 35% by 1991, before experiencing a steady increase to 50%
at the end
, making it the highest proportion of all. With respect to the percentage of
households
using more than 2
cars
, its trend was similar to
the
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that
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1
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of 1
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car
with
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reaching a peak at 30% in 1981,
pior
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prior
to going down
moderably
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moderately
miserably
to more than 20% by 1991 and
then
went
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going
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up to 35% by 2001. Turning towards the remaining trend which had no
cars
in use, it is obvious that between 1971 and 2001, it just saw a decline from about 45% to 25%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, cars, car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • car ownership
  • no car
  • one car
  • two or more cars
  • trend
  • proportion
  • gradual increase
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • substantial
  • rivals
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