You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear
purnomo
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promo
, Hai pur , long
taime
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time
no see
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hope you having
agood
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a good
time
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this
time,I am
wrting
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writing
this
letter to inform
that
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you that
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i
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I
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have
some
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a
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party
in
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my house
this
week,
i
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I
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hope you can join
this
party
.
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weeks later
i
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have
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had
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party
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a party
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in
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my
hause
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house
because my daughter will greaduate from his
scool
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school
,and my mom asked me
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making saome little
party
in
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my house.
Then
for
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direction
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direction,
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have put in
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a leafled
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leafled
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leaflet
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so
do'nt
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don't
worry about how to find my house later . I think for all
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accommodation
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accommodation
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guess
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guess
you
have known
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about it because you have
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for
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here before,but
for
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apply
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this
time
i
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have
friend
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a friend
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that
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have given
them
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apply
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information
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about
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it
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apply
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,so you just
came
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come
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here and
i
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pick you up
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at
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the airport
then
you directly
caming
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coming
camping
here For
this
moment
i
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just want to see you
came
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come
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here and
having
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have
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this
party
with my family here. and you can spend
night
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the night
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for
long
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the long
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term here.
Then
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you
yuo
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you
can
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apply
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play
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paly
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play
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around with me
after
this
party
and
i
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give you facilities for going
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anywhere
enywhere
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anywhere
I am writing
this
letter to look forward to
hereng
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hearing
from you soon you
sicerelly
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sincerely
abi
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spelling
Make sure to proofread your letter to catch and correct spelling errors
complex sentences
Use more complex sentences to improve coherence and flow
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph covers a single, clear idea to enhance readability
complete response
You've addressed all the key points: reason for the party, directions to the venue, and accommodation
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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