In the present world, a lot of
people
especially young working
people
tend to live in the city center or near the industrial areas more than rural areas. These are the reasons why
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accommodationFix the agreement mistake
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like
condominiums
and apartment blocks have
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the city. Some individuals believe that high-rise building is the most efficient way to create more housing
space
while
others think that
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houses
on
land
is better. I personally think that living in
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house
is far better in utilizing
space
than in
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.
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both have pros and cons, described in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, it is undeniable that nowadays humans prefer living near their job even though they need to live in
such
a smaller room than they used to
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in their home.
Following
this
, living in high-rise
condominiums
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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a good choice because of some advantages
such
as convenient commute, the vertical
space
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utilized efficiently in the limited vertical area, and most
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offer free facilities like a swimming pool and a fitness
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.
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, living in
this
type of accommodation
also
causeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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some disadvantages because of the cluster of
people
packed in
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one building, increasing the stress. To illustrate,
people
who live in
condominiums
with other members will have
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limited personal
space
and sometimes need to share the
space
with others,
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cause
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stress and low personal
space
.
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in
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house
on
land
may tackle
this
problem.
On the one hand, living in a
house
property on
land
can bring more benefits
such
as the
houses
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more
space
for each
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the family, the
house offersWrong verb form
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more green
space
, allowing
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some trees or flowers, lower
people
in the horizontal area making not packed population which leading to
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feeling.
For instance
,
people
who plan to
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the aChoose an article
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pet or
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a kid would prefer choosing
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in
houseAdd an article
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because there are more spaces for growing and fostering
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incremental family members.
On the other hand
,
houses
also
have a drawback,
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with the same
space
of condominium, the under-middle class person cannot
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the prices of both
land
and the
house
.
To conclude
, Living in many
houses
on
land
would bring more positive influences, not only the way of efficiently
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the utilizing
space
in horizontal areas but
also
less cluster of the habitants. At the same time,
land
and
houses
would be more expensive than flats or
condominiums
which may not
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for poverty or lower-class citizens.