The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees
The given
map
illustrates the future plan for a new factory complex and residence fares for employees. It is divided Use synonyms
five
main segments into industrial Change preposition
into five
areas
, housing Use synonyms
areas
and gymnastic Use synonyms
areas
.
Use synonyms
As it
can be seen Correct word choice
It
that
the Correct word choice
apply
center
Change the spelling
centre
area
would be situated main industrial Use synonyms
areas
which Use synonyms
was
surrounded by a roundabout, and Change the verb form
were
also
would Linking Words
locate
Wrong verb form
be located
in
a crossroad from east to west, and from north to south. Change preposition
at
Linking Words
This
Change the determiner
This area
These areas
areas
can be only entered via Use synonyms
east
road. Correct article usage
the east
In addition
, another industrial Linking Words
Use synonyms
areas
is based on the southeastern corner of the Replace the adjective
area
map
Use synonyms
where
is far from residences mainly because of Correct word choice
which
isolation
of Correct article usage
the isolation
noice
it might generate. An office and a meeting room would Correct your spelling
noise
situate
at the northwest and the southeast, respectively. They seem to be bevel symmetry.
Moving to housing Wrong verb form
be situated
areas
, Use synonyms
it is clear that
the biggest scale of residential place would be arranged at the northwestern corner of Linking Words
this
region, Linking Words
the
second big scale Correct word choice
and the
of
housing Change preposition
apply
area
would be located at the Use synonyms
west most
of the Correct your spelling
westmost
map
which is just adjacent Use synonyms
with
the main west-east road, with a parking around the housing Change preposition
to
areas
where people could walk around, indicating factory designed a relaxed working atmosphere to employees. The Use synonyms
last
minimum housing Linking Words
area
would be arranged at the northeastern of the Use synonyms
map
with a swimming pool aside, which means people could take Use synonyms
apart
in some regular physical exercise there.
Correct your spelling
part
To sum up
, Linking Words
this
factory would be designed Linking Words
to
different parts to provide Change preposition
into
working
place and living Add an article
a working
the working
area
Use synonyms
seperately
, which would apply Correct your spelling
separately
work-life
balance atmosphere to employees.Correct article usage
a work-life
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