The map show a presents lauout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment

The map show a presents lauout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map show a presents lauout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Contained in the maps
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
information pertaining to the changes which are
ecpected
Correct your spelling
expected
to take play at
a
Change the article
an
show examples
office
Use synonyms
builing
Correct your spelling
building
. Generally speaking,
Use synonyms
office
Add an article
the office
show examples
was built more
i
Correct your spelling
in
show examples
the future
while
Linking Words
grass
Use synonyms
, kitchen and canteen
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
no longer exist,
Additionally
Linking Words
,
store
Correct article usage
the store
show examples
room
also
Linking Words
remain
Wrong verb form
remained
show examples
the same. In the
north west
Correct your spelling
northwest
show examples
of the
office
Use synonyms
,
Use synonyms
grass
Add an article
the grass
show examples
was
knocked-down
Correct your spelling
knocked down
show examples
and replaced with
outdoor
Correct article usage
an outdoor
show examples
seat area, kitchen and canteen
also
Linking Words
removed and changed with
Use synonyms
office
Add an article
the office
an office
show examples
. Coming to
North east
Correct your spelling
Northeast
show examples
,
Store
Correct article usage
the Store
show examples
roomalso
Correct your spelling
room also
remain
Wrong verb form
remained
show examples
while
Linking Words
Use synonyms
grass
Add an article
the grass
show examples
was alternative with
coffee
Correct article usage
the coffee
show examples
machine and
WCs
Correct article usage
the WCs
show examples
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
show examples
flattened to the corner of the
north east
Correct your spelling
northeast
show examples
. Moving onto
south east
Add a hyphen
south-east
show examples
,
meeting
Correct article usage
a meeting
show examples
area and chairs
was appeared
Change to the active voice
appeared
has appeared
show examples
at the
cornor
Correct your spelling
corner
, the entrance was flattened to between two offices
room
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
show examples
and the
office
Use synonyms
rooms was made bigger. In the
Add a hyphen
south-west
show examples
south west
Correct your spelling
southwest
show examples
,
Use synonyms
office
Add an article
the office
show examples
was made bigger and the
grass
Use synonyms
was knocked down and replaced with chairs

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words office, grass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: