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The map shows a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The map shows a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.
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The graphics illustrate a contemporary design of an
office
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 building compared to its plan for upcoming construction. Generally speaking, it is predicted that there will be a substantial expansion. By repurposing grass areas
in
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on
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 two sides.
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Although
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However
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, there will be several changes in the plan. The only
exception
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exceptions
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is
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are
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 the storeroom and the entrance in the western. The grass area in the eastern part of the
office
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 building will be removed and used for
work place
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workplace
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. In detail, in the right bottom corner, a meeting area and chairs will be set up and it is
also
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 expected that
here
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there
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 will be a
rest room
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restroom
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 with a coffee machine nearby there.
Otherwise
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,
the
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in the
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 other grass area in the western, many chairs will be added likely for the outdoor-activity demand from
staffs
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staff
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.
Additionally
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, the second entrance is in the southeastern corner
will
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and will
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 be moved to the middle. It will be between the two
office
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rooms
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. To ensure the quantity of the
office
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rooms
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 (4
rooms
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), the kitchen and canteen will be replaced with the two
office
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rooms
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 for wider space need.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words office, rooms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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