THE CHART BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ON NUMBER OF WORKERS IN DIFFERENT OCCUPATIONS WHO MIGRATED TO AUSTRALIA BETWEEN 2009 AND 2012. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.
The given bar chart illustrates information about the
proporation
of workers in various Correct your spelling
proportion
proportions
career
that migrated to Australia from 2009 to 2012. The units are measured in percentage.
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careers
Overall
, it can be seen that cook
and software engineer had a
similar highest figures in 2011 Correct article usage
apply
while
accountant had the maximum in 2010. Additionally
, computer programmar
had the lowest over 4 years.
Looking at the figures in Correct your spelling
programming
further
detail, it can
obvious the amount of Verb problem
is
accountant
stood at 20 Fix the agreement mistake
accountants
thousand
and reached a high top about
28 Change preposition
of about
thousand
then
ending up at 21 thousand
in 2012. By contrast
, Add an article
the computer
computer
had Fix the agreement mistake
computers
a
same number at 2 Correct article usage
the
thousand
in both years 2009 and 2011. Additonally
, in 2010 and 2012 it was a noticeable increase at 4 Correct your spelling
Additionally
thousand
and 5 thousand
respectively.
Turning to the remaining data, cook
and engineer both reached a high top in 2011 with 18 and 21 thousand
. In 2010, software stood at 20. By contrast
, cook
reached a low bottom at 16. In 2009, Correct article usage
the cook
cook
and software accounted for 17 and 19 thousand
respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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