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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS FOUR MEHODS OF DEALING WITH WASTE IN FOUR COUNTRIES. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELVENT.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS FOUR MEHODS OF DEALING WITH WASTE IN FOUR COUNTRIES. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELVENT.
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THE BAR CHART COMPARES THE PERCENTAGE OF
WASTE
DISPOSED
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 USING VARIOUS METHODS IN
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THE NETHERLANDS
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NETHERLANDS
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THE NETHERLANDS
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, ITALY,
SPAIN
 AND THE
UK
.
OVERALL
, MOST OF THE
WASTE
 IN THE
UK
, ITALY AND
SPAIN
 WERE LANDFILLED, BUT NETHERLANDS RECYCLED A LARGE PROPORTION OF THEIR
WASTE
. THE PROPORTION OF
WASTE
 LANDFILLED IN THE
UK
 WAS SIGNIFICANTLY HIGHER THAN THT OF ITALY AND
SPAIN
. ALMOST 65% OF
WASTE
 WAS LANDFILLED IN THE
UK
,
WHEREAS
 THE PROPORTION OF
WASTE
DISCARED
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DISPOSED
 USING THE SAME METHOD WAS EQUAL IN ITALY AND
SPAIN
 AT 40%. LANDFILLE WAS THE LEAST FAVOURED METHOD OF
WASTE
 DISPOSAL IN
NETHERLANDS
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THE NETHERLANDS
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 AND ONLY AROUND 8% OF THEIR
WASTE
 WAS
LANFILLED
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LANDFILLED
. THE PERCENTAGE OF
WASTE
 BURNT IN
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THE NETHERLAND
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NETHERLAND
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NETHERLANDS
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 AND ONLY WAS 10%, BUT IN
SPAIN
THIS
 RATE WAS TRIPLE.
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THE MOST
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MOST
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THE MOST
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POPULAR
POPULA
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POPULAR
 METHOD OF DEALING WITH
WASTE
 WAS RECYCLING IN
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THE NETHERLAND
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NETHERLANDS
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NETHERLAND
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NETHERLANDS
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 AND IT RECYCLED ABOUT 68% OF ITS
WASTE
,
WHILE
 20% OF
WASTE
 WAS RECYCLED IN ITALY, IT WAS NEARLY 14% IN THE
UK
 AND
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APPROXIMATELY
APPOXIMATELY
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APPROXIMATELY
 11% IN
SPAIN
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, spain, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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