The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map depicts a
library
plan between 2001 and 2009. Overall
, it can be seen that the library
had significant changes, and
in 2001 the Correct word choice
apply
libaray
had Correct your spelling
library
a basic and fairly simple things
, but with the passage of Correct the article-noun agreement
basic and fairly simple things
a basic and fairly simple thing
time
there Add a comma
time,
had
been more modern equipment.
Wrong verb form
has
To begin
with, in the south, the enterance
, librarian's desk, and stairs Correct your spelling
entrance
were remained
at the same location in 2009 as they were not changed; Change to the active voice
remained
have remained
however
, there was a huge change in the west side
of the library
. In 2001, there were only self help
and history Add a hyphen
self-help
section
, but in 2009 the west Fix the agreement mistake
sections
side
was expanded with the addition of 4 more sections, which were kitchen, economics, law, and fiction.
Besides
this
, computers were added in the south-east
Correct your spelling
southeast
section
of the library
. In
the east Change preposition
On
side
of the library
there was a newspapers and periodicals Add a comma
library,
section
which was then
replaced by films and dvd's in 2009. Moreover
, there were 8 small tables in the middle of the library
which were also
replaced by large 4 tables in 2009, and the leftover space was converted to children's
area. Correct article usage
a children's
Also
, on the ground floor, fiction
Correct article usage
the fiction
section
was moved to the west side
of the library
, and that whole place was converted to
Change preposition
into
children's
book Correct article usage
a children's
section
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, side, section with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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