The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.
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The maps juxtaposed how the
city
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of Kimsville changed between 2002 and today.
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, what stands out from the map is that
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there has been a significant change in the structure of the
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.
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, Kimsville used to be greener and had a lot more
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, but now the
city
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is home to a lot of new construction. Looking at the maps in more detail, the
city
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had a simple view in 2002. There were only three public facilities in the
city
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, including a shopping
centre
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on the north side, a factory near the
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centre
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and an old cinema where located between the
trees
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on the south and east sides.
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, there were many
trees
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in all four corners of the
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. Since
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, after several years, the
city
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has undergone important changes.
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the shopping
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in the north of the
city
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has remained the same with no changes, the old cinema has been replaced by a new pub, and the factory has been converted by the software company.
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, a new train station was built near the
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centre
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and the green area, where located in the northwest part of the map, has been replaced with new apartments, and the
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in the west-south corner were cleared to make way for a football stadium. Another interesting point is that the
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on both the northeast and east-south sides of the
city
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have remained stable respectively.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, trees, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential development
  • transformation
  • industrial areas
  • housing estates
  • service-oriented economy
  • modern apartment complexes
  • amenities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • congestion
  • bicycle lanes
  • eco-friendly
  • accessibility
  • public spaces
  • recreational facilities
  • quality of life
  • vibrant community
  • leisure
  • exercise
  • social interaction
  • well-being
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