In some cultures the old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the

erlderly

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elderly

is

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have been

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appreciated in many countries.

However

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the younger generation is more

fluential

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influential

in

others

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other

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nations. Both have merits but I am personally of the opinion that despite the benefits that the younger

fostered

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,

people

should have gratitude towards the older

people

due to

the fact that they bring about a lot of advantages to daily life. On the one hand, the younger generations have played an

intergral

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integral

part in creating many cutting-edge inventions in the world. Those

people

have

ability

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to think and make their ideas come true for

sake

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the sake

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of exerting efforts and

their

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apply

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creativity.

Therefore

, to satisfy the demands of the

inviduals

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individuals

in the ameliorated world,

manufactures

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manufacturers

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should have to recruit a large majority of the youth to boost the

labor

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labour

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products higher.

For instance

, many Asian countries currently

tends

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to find young human resources to work for them to raise their sales.

On the other hand

, the older, who have a lot of experience and profound understanding about many extents play a vital role in increasing the economic values. When recruiting the old age, companies do not need to train them anymore because those

people

have devoted all their

life

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lives

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to contributing

the

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to the

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growth of societies.

Furthermore

,

this

convenience helps a large number of managers of enterprises save time and

efforts

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effort

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for training new employees. Take an example, the older

staffs

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staff

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in some developed nations often do the task effectively and better than others. In conclusion, I think the younger generation holds a greater importance in our community. Their performance can predict the fate of a nation. They will be standing in leadership roles, involved in crucial decisions, and shaping the future. The older generation passes their expertise and morals to a young person, which better prepares them to manoeuvre countless changes in the future society.