The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph
display
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displays
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five types of
food
that were consumed in Australia during six decades from 1950.
Overall
, the
amount
of
food
which was eaten in 2010 was more than in 1950 for all kinds of
food
except meat,
that
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which
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means the
amount
food
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of food
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increased with time except for some years.The vegetable consumption was the highest
food
,
while
the seafood consumption was the lowest among all categories.
According to
what is shown, There was a flclouted in the
amount
of vegetables from 120 to 160
kg
per
person
per
year
during six decades,
while
the
amount
of fruit was between 80 and 100
kg
per
person
per
year
from 1950 to 1980, after that, it rose to 140
kg
per
person
per
year
in 2010. The
amount
of bread that was eaten by people from 40 to 60
kg
per
person
per
year
during
this
period except in 1970 was about 70
kg
per
person
per
year
. the size of seafood which was consumed was approximately 20 in all years.
However
, the
amount
of meat decreased from 110 to 80
kg
per
person
per
year
except in 1990, it was around 120
kg
per
person
per
year
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, amount, kg, person, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • dietary preferences
  • staple foods
  • health awareness
  • rising health concerns
  • shift towards healthier eating habits
  • intake
  • notable trend
  • significant feature
  • consumption
  • reflecting changing
  • availability
  • a decline towards
  • initially increased
  • steady rise
  • marked decrease
  • period of stability
  • dramatically
  • a sharp rise
  • gradual change
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