The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph
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five types of
food
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that were consumed in Australia during six decades from 1950.
Overall
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, the
amount
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of
food
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which was eaten in 2010 was more than in 1950 for all kinds of
food
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except meat,
that
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means the
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food
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increased with time except for some years.The vegetable consumption was the highest
food
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,
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the seafood consumption was the lowest among all categories.
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what is shown, There was a flclouted in the
amount
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of vegetables from 120 to 160
kg
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per
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year
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during six decades,
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the
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of fruit was between 80 and 100
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per
person
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year
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from 1950 to 1980, after that, it rose to 140
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per
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in 2010. The
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of bread that was eaten by people from 40 to 60
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per
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year
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during
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period except in 1970 was about 70
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. the size of seafood which was consumed was approximately 20 in all years.
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, the
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of meat decreased from 110 to 80
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per
person
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year
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except in 1990, it was around 120
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per
person
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per
year
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, amount, kg, person, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • dietary preferences
  • staple foods
  • health awareness
  • rising health concerns
  • shift towards healthier eating habits
  • intake
  • notable trend
  • significant feature
  • consumption
  • reflecting changing
  • availability
  • a decline towards
  • initially increased
  • steady rise
  • marked decrease
  • period of stability
  • dramatically
  • a sharp rise
  • gradual change
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