The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps give information about the shifts occurring in Lynwich

College

from 2006 to today.

Overall

it is clear that

the

college

has been upgraded with more facilities in terms of transportation, recreation and beverage.

In addition

, it can

also

be noted that there has been a reduction in the size of green space in

flavor

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to extend road infrastructure and better serve the students. Looking at the upper part of

the

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Lynwich

College

, it can be observed that there

has

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been more transport options by

the

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road as there used to be solely a car park in 2006. Now, with the car park being miniaturized by half of its size,

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storage for bikes has

then

been installed next to it

along with

the construction of a bus stop on the other side. For better access to them, roads branching from the newly built cafeteria which is now located in the

center

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of the

college

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paved directly to those amenities for transportation. Moving to the other part of the

college

, it can be seen that

although

the

college

buildings and the sports field remain intact, other facilities are spotted to be either relocated or recently added. Regarding the library, even though in 2006, it used to be adjacent to the car park, in

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present day

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it has

then

been moved to the vacant space between the teaching buildings where trees had to be

cutted

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down. In order to create an active lifestyle for the students, a sports

center

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was constructed

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where the library was, contiguous to the other recreational field.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

264 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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