The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart illustrates information pertaining to the teaching
hours
of
teachers
every year in four different nations during 2001.
Overall
, it can be seen that upper and lower-secondary
teachers
did more
hours
of teaching than primary
ones
in every country.
Additionally
, it is apparent that the highest number of teaching
hours
was for upper secondary
teachers
,
whereas
the opposite was true for primary
ones
in all nations. Looking at the statistics for the USA in
further
detail, where upper secondary
teachers
took the dominance of nearly 1200
hours
,
while
lower secondary and primary
teachers
only accounted for exactly 1000 and approximately 750
hours
, respectively.
Similarly
, upper secondary
teachers
in Iceland outnumbered primary and lower secondary
ones
at more than 900 compared to roughly 600
hours
. Turning to the remaining nations, where less substantial disparities were recorded. Specifically, Spain had its number of upper secondary
teachers
’ teaching
hours
added up to exactly 900
hours
, which was higher than around 750
hours
for lower secondary and under 700
hours
for primary
ones
. The number of teaching
hours
each year of upper secondary
teachers
in Japan, was
similarly
, recorded at exactly 750
hours
,
while
other categories were just nearly 650
hours
or less.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, teachers, ones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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  • annual hours of teaching
  • teaching workload
  • educational systems
  • teacher-student ratio
  • significantly
  • slightly
  • noticeably
  • gap
  • highest/lowest number of hours
  • compare
  • contrast
  • reflect
  • variations
  • distribution of teaching hours
  • average
  • respectively
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