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You have just returned from a holiday. You are unhappy with the quality of the hotel you stayed in and want to complain to the travel agency that arranged the holiday. Write a letter to the manager of the travel agency. In your letter, * say about the holiday and where you stayed * mention why you are unhappy about the hotel where you stayed * say what you would like the travel agency to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to complain about the
quailty
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quality
 of the
hotel
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 that your esteemed company helped in the arrangement. The
hotel
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 named ' Holidayin'.
Its
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It's
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 located in the city
center
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centre
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. I only
spend
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spent
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 around 2 days in
this
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hotel
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, and as soon as I realized how bad it was, I moved to another
hotel
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 to complete my vacation.
At
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In
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 the beginning I got shocked
about
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by
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 the customer service, as I arrived early and spoke with the reception staff, I
were
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 told that there
is
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was
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 no room
avaliable
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available
 for the next 5 hours. I really had to wait all
this
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 time and I had to skip an important activity because of the lack of time.As well, after I got the room I
noticied
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noticed
 that it was not cleaned very well.
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 I became disappointed again and
think to make
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a
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of
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complain
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complaining
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 about what happened. I kindly request
for
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apply
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a refund of the
hotel
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 cost, if you need any information please
contact
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contact me
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, Thank you for understanding,
nouf
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of
noun
 Regards,

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task achievement
Ensure to provide more specific details about the issues encountered. For example, describe more about the condition of the room or other aspects of poor service.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by clearly separating the introduction, body, and conclusion into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Avoid minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'quailty,' 'Holidayin,' and 'were' instead of 'was.' Proofreading can help minimize these mistakes.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter were polite and appropriate for a formal complaint.
task achievement
The writer clearly states the purpose of the letter and makes a specific request for a refund.
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