You have just returned from a holiday. You are unhappy with the quality of the hotel you stayed in and want to complain to the travel agency that arranged the holiday. Write a letter to the manager of the travel agency. In your letter, * say about the holiday and where you stayed * mention why you are unhappy about the hotel where you stayed * say what you would like the travel agency to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about the quailty
of the Correct your spelling
quality
hotel
that your esteemed company helped in the arrangement.
The hotel
named ' Holidayin'. Its
located in the city Correct your spelling
It's
center
. I only Change the spelling
centre
spend
around 2 days in Wrong verb form
spent
this
hotel
, and as soon as I realized how bad it was, I moved to another hotel
to complete my vacation.
At
the beginning I got shocked Change preposition
In
about
the customer service, as I arrived early and spoke with the reception staff, I Change preposition
by
were
told that there Change the verb form
was
is
no room Wrong verb form
was
avaliable
for the next 5 hours. I really had to wait all Correct your spelling
available
this
time and I had to skip an important activity because of the lack of time.As well, after I got the room I noticied
that it was not cleaned very well.Correct your spelling
noticed
Therefore
I became disappointed again and think to make
Wrong verb form
thought
a
Correct your spelling
of
complain
about what happened.
I kindly request Wrong verb form
complaining
for
a refund of the Change preposition
apply
hotel
cost, if you need any information please contact
,
Thank you for understanding,
Correct pronoun usage
contact me
nouf
Regards,Correct your spelling
of
noun
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task achievement
Ensure to provide more specific details about the issues encountered. For example, describe more about the condition of the room or other aspects of poor service.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by clearly separating the introduction, body, and conclusion into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Avoid minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'quailty,' 'Holidayin,' and 'were' instead of 'was.' Proofreading can help minimize these mistakes.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter were polite and appropriate for a formal complaint.
task achievement
The writer clearly states the purpose of the letter and makes a specific request for a refund.