The tables below give the information about sales of Faietrade labelled coffee and benanas in 1999 and 2004 in five Eropean countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give the information about sales of Faietrade labelled coffee and benanas in 1999 and 2004 in five Eropean countries. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables provide some data on the
sales
in millions of
Euros
of Fairtrade coffee and bananas in two years among five different nations ( England, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden).
Overall
, it is evident that, in 2004, the countries’ revenues increased in both products except for Sweden and Denmark in bananas. In 1999, in the coffee
industry
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all the nations were able to gain the same incomes with some fluctuations,
however
, Switzerland had the highest
sales
among the others, 3
million
Euros
. In 2004,
this
country was able to double its
sales
of coffee. The revenue of the UK skyrocketed
this
year and reached 20
million
Euros
.
Whereas
, the other nations saw a slight growth in their
sales
. In
banana
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trade, Switzerland stood in
the
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first place and gained great money in 1999 and peaked in 2004, from 15 to 47
million
Euros
. England and Belgium followed
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same pattern and had a significant increase in 2004.
In contrast
, Sweden and Denmark had approximately 2
million
Euros
income in 1999 and witnessed a small drop in 2004 and
rerespectivelyached
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re respectively ached
,
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1 and 0.9
million
Euros
, .
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,
.
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