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You are studying mathematics at university and have an assignment next week. You have been sick. Write a letter to your teacher asking for an extension on your assignment. In the letter, explain that you are a student in the mathematics class explain that you have been sick ask for an extension Write at least 150 words.  You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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 email finds you well, I am writing
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 letter to inform you about my health conditions that led me to
being
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 late in submitting the Homework,and how
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effecting
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 my studying performance
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 university these days. My name is Nouf and I am taking the mathematics course with you ,section 76. I
have been
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 sick
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weeks ago, as my Doctor asked me to stay away from using the Laptop because of my
eyes
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 condition.
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, I found myself in a
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 situation where I was not able to take the assignment during the required period. I kindly
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from
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 you extend the assignment deadline for me to next week, as my eyes health will be better and I am sure that I will submit the assignment as soon as possible. Thank you for your understanding, Nouf, Best Regards,
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language
Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammar errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve coherence and clarity.
suitable writing tone
Appropriate tone and respectful language used when making the request.
complete response
The letter contains a clear request and necessary details explaining the situation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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